Thursday, 15 January 2009

The Spontaneous Overflow

“If poetry comes not as naturally as the leaves to a tree, it had better not come at all” – this is how the celebrated poet, John Keats put it. Poetry is actually a spontaneous overflow of emotions, as Wordsworth said. I myself experienced it yet another time. I wrote a poem at a time when I wondered if my mind could ever be diverted towards writing a poem, and this time was when I was studying for my exam the next day. The day was when the festival of Lohri was being celebrated on January 12 and I could hear the beats of the drum. And it took me just a minute to jot it down. This is what I wrote:

I am pitying myself at this time!

I hear voices of celebration around me,

but I cannot rejoice

‘Coz I am condemned to testing myself!!!

O! that I were free -

free from the ties that bind.

The bird is free, so is the child

Why not I?

Nobody answers…

It is I who was the chooser;

and now the difference it makes to me:

Being engulfed by the binding vine!

That was just a poetic outpour but anyway the exam was good (thanks to my preparation). After all, we have to work hard to achieve something. And now I am waiting for the result. I suppose, wishes never end! Do they? Think about it.

10 comments:

Book Calendar said...

That is often the best kind of poetry. You can edit it for grammar afterwards if you want or just leave it. People pick up on this kind of thing. It happens to me quite often on the train.

Amritbir Kaur said...

I agree with your views. It has happened many times earlier with me too but this was my first time in exams, a poem being churned out when I was in the midst of books that were not in anyway related to literature.
Thanks for sharing your views.

Jyoti said...

Well written sweet soul and all the best for the exams.

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Sanjita said...

Well, i guess thats very natural to people with poetic intincts as it always happens with me too and i need to jot it down what all my mind gets in a apur of the moment..

Amritbir Kaur said...

Thank you Jyoti for your equally sweet comment.

Amritbir Kaur said...

Thanks Tomas Sir for your meaningful comment. Wishing purity gets its due once again in the present times!

Amritbir Kaur said...

Welcome to my blog again Sanjita. Thanks for sharing your experiences. This 'spontaneous overflow' has happened quite often with me too, but because of exams it special. The next day I had an exam without a holiday, so probably this overflow had a cathartic effect.

surjit said...

'Emotions recolleted in tranquilty:
'but I cannot rejoice.........
.It is I who was the chooser;
Beautiful verse.. depicts realism.
As I already mentioned you are a poet in the making.
God bless.

Amritbir Kaur said...

Thanks Surjit ji for your compliment and the encouragement.

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