What if I can’t cry
when heart is heavy,
I still can wipe a tear
with my laughing eyes.
What if I can’t fly
even if heart wishes to,
I still can soar high
with daring dreams.
What if words fail me
when it is most important,
I still can surely make
my silence expressive.
What if I can’t have
what I wish to,
I still can achieve
what I aspire to.
when heart is heavy,
I still can wipe a tear
with my laughing eyes.
What if I can’t fly
even if heart wishes to,
I still can soar high
with daring dreams.
What if words fail me
when it is most important,
I still can surely make
my silence expressive.
What if I can’t have
what I wish to,
I still can achieve
what I aspire to.
© Amritbir Kaur
13 comments:
Good one man!
where there is will, there's always a way out :)
Thanks Issam for your encouraging feedback and also for adding new insights to the poem.
what if i can't stop myself reading your creation....
i m sure if i stop i'll sure bury my passion....
awesome composition...
cudn't take my eyes off it...
keep rolling ji...
Thanks Surender for adding your valuable thoughts to my post.
Poem has so many meanings that man can achieve even in failure.
In every part of poem what it dererves from a achiever is "Confidence"
Thanks for posting this.
This poem shows what a man/woman can do even in worse situations.But what dedserve is confidence
smart poem
Thanks for posting this
Thanks Naren for showing so much interest in the poem as to interpret it in various ways.
Beautiful... There is a gleam at the end of every verse despite the odds i feel...
Beautiful! Optimism at its best....Great work done Amritbir.
Take care!
I visited the blog and really liked the poems. What if , is really too good , makes look things better at many tough ends,basically at cross-roads of life and situations.
great work.
Regds
Onkarjot Singh
Thanks Puneet Kaur ji for your optimistic analysis.
Thanks Manivannan for your encouraing words.
Welcome to my blog Onkarjot Singh ji and thanks for your encouraging feedback and also adding valuable insights to my poem.
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